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Ecco il secondo capitolo tradotto in inglese da me!! Se qualcuno può controllare eventuali errori e darmi un giudizio!!!
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Chapter 2
THE BEST OF THE DARK
BOOKS

He had come too soon, the little book store was not
still open. He does not expect was that he could not afford
of attention.
He sat on a bench across the street. Was
tired, now almost a month had passed since he had left
for the mission. The first part, the most dangerous, was accomplished.
But even now, the mere fact of being in the city, was a risk.
For this was to use Polyjuice Potion. He had
drinking just before the edge of the country to materialize.
He had used the hair of a fat drunk who had Muggle
met the night before. He felt embarrassed and disgusted by
that new look, but it was necessary, was to remain hidden.
He thought of what had happened a few days earlier, when
had? nally found the castle that had been described
? A fortress, as black as night?. According to what he had
learned, Grindelwald had spent the last years of his life
locked in a cell in the highest of the towers. And right there
was found mysteriously dead. Only later did
was found that
Voldemort was just to kill him in his search for
Elder Wand.
But he was looking for something else in that fortress. He struggled
to get them through all the protective spells
scattered throughout the castle, but the? he had made it. Had
in? they discovered that only in his dreams he hoped to find.
He awoke from his thoughts. He pulled out a scruffy newspaper
from the inside pocket of his jacket tight. He did not understand their own
As the muggles could bring clothes so uncomfortable! The newspaper
The Daily Prophet was a few days before. Article
Main him gut-wrenching:
AGREEMENT SIGNED WITH CREATURES
MAGIC
It was? Nally established CIOcCoCreMa (Centre Inter-
Collaboration with Oculata of Magical Creatures).
The announcement was made yesterday by Minister of Magic himself. The
Minister Kingsley told a preview to our newspaper
what? After the recent events we have seen in the United
fighting the dark forces, to confirm the relationship
that must exist between the Wizards and Witches and all other
magical creatures has created this new body?.
Will consist of half and half members of the Ministry
representatives of other magical creatures around the world.
The El? household and the Centaurs have already signed up and soon
joined by representatives of other groups.
To oversee the signing of this important agreement will
u visited? cial to the Ministry the President of Wizards
of America with a large delegation of American Magicians? is
an important step?, said President John Waynegan,
? The U.S. Wizards We will strive to make this
pact is signed in the best way and represents a
advantage for all of us?.
Stopped reading. He was terrified, magicians reduced to the same level
of l? household.
Not only was returned to the state of things prior to
Voldemort's 8, but he went too far. The enthusiasm for
the death of the Dark Lord, so long repressed, had infected
magic the whole population, and a desire to respect and
partnership was entered into the heart of everyone.
Although he, of course, did not think so. Its
pure blood was boiling in his veins.
Began to read. A between? Remembered reading on the bottom of the page
that were under preparation for the start of the new
year at Hogwarts. ? Thanks to the contribution of American Magicians
are they? nally finished rebuilding of our
beloved Hogwarts - page. 4 interview with the headmaster and McGonagall
rumors on the renewed teaching staff? .
He heard a noise from the other side of the road. The
heavy wooden shutters of the shop who was keeping an eye on
opened slowly. On the threshold appeared the silhouette curve
a very old man. Canute, and veined with white skin
as a scroll, did not seem even a magician, after
many years lived among the muggles.
The old man took a few steps, looked left and right
and then returned.
? The time has come? he muttered to himself, putting away the
newspaper and headed for the library.
Inside were books everywhere, some neatly arranged
on maturity? wings, but most stacked in an unstable
in every corner of the room.
? Hello, hello, can I help you? welcomed him on
old from behind the counter.
? Sure. I'll be very useful? said the magician, with a? of the
ill-concealed malice in his voice.
? Cinereus, do not you recognize me?.
The old man seemed to stagger behind the counter. The Potion
Polyjuice had changed the face and body, but its
voice, deep and hoarse, was unmistakable.
? What are you doing here. . . you should not show you around. I. . . I do not
I have nothing to do with you?.
? We need you cinereus?.
? Not say that name, not mine anymore. . . you
you have not yet resigned! Now is it? Nite, we no longer
no hope. We are lucky not to be? Ned for all
Azkaban and if anyone knew who you are. . . ?.
? Just cinereus! We need your expertise. Take the
your things and come with me?.
? Leave me alone! What can I do, I'm just a poor
old. What I believe I do not care, I want to
only go in peace the last years I have left? said
whining.
? Cinereus have no time to lose. Do not make me angry
or me. . . ?.
The old man gave him time to finish the sentence, with a
surprisingly quick motion, pulled the rod
under the counter. But before you can make a spell
cried the other? Expelliarmus?.
The wand flew cinereus against a tall stack of books
making it collapse.
? Start cinereus bad, very bad start? said
the magician through gritted teeth.
He heard footsteps come from the back of the store and a small
elderly woman, still wrapped in a garish robe
burgundy, yes to? lest by a door hidden behind a curtain.
? Who cried? What ever. . . ? when he saw a man pointing
a wand against her husband know? oco barely a cry,
bringing hands to his mouth shocked.
The wizard just deigned to glance at. ? It's all right
cinereus true? kept coming back to? ssare old? Now his
husband will be with me lady. To her the task of make believe
everyone who is bedridden with a serious illness. Are
in a few and we must remain hidden, but do not believe that
we are able to kill an old witch as your wife?.
They stayed for a few moments all still and silent.
? Cinereus Do you understand? said the magician breaking the silence.
? Yes, I understand? surrender the old.
The magician's wand picked it up from the floor and made cinereus
disappear in the interior of the jacket, took the old man's arm
and dematerialization.
The wife dropped into a chair. He had hoped that
everything was? nite. Finally her husband seemed determined
to live in serenity. Now everything was changed, the
again.
It rematerialize within a forest.
? Come on, now we get to the other? said a voice
hoarse starting to walk. The two men walked with difficulty
inside? tta bush. Those places probably
were not visited since time immemorial.
The cold came in the bones. Although it was broad daylight,
a fog? tta enveloped everything. Even chopsticks could
to illuminate more than a few steps forward. Other people do not
would have survived in that environment, would be on it? likely
A sense of oppression, deprived of every spark of vitality.
But both of them and had no Dementors? Pound, their
soul was evil, there was nothing which could be
private.
The cheerfulness and good humor that had fallen across the land
After the epic battle of Hogwarts, had decimated the Dementors.
They were withdrawn in this region where poverty and poverty
already took away all hope in the future. With their arrival the whole
was even worse, no magician with a bit 'of salt
would set foot in this area. But for them it was different,
what had become the best place to hide.
? Here we are? said the magician. Ahead was a rock
on which were engraved with two cross marks. He reached his wand
above the boulder and whispered a few formulas.
? Now we can go, but quickly, spells of protection
reactivate it now?.
? Who do you think we are in this forsaken place. . . and who
should look for? complained cinereus panting.
? Shut up old man! You do not think we considered every eventuality?
? said the magician angry.
Just at that moment stopped and the? Ounce of Polyjuice Potion.
Cinereus were years, from his hiding Muggle,
did not attend to this magic. That body is fat and jolly
contracted up to 8, under his desperate eyes, the gaunt
shape of the magician with whom he had once shared many ideals.
By now they had arrived, but glimpsed the outline of the ruins
only at the last minute, almost invisible between? tta vegetation.
The years of neglect and nature took over.
Climbers, solid like broomsticks, seemed
want to crush the house. Many branches had broken? Windows
and had gone through the roof, blasting most of the
tiles.
They went up three steps and stood in the doorway. At the door
was attached to an antique brass door knocker, ra? gurante head
a small s? nge.
The magician decided knocked three times, and when the echo of the clapper
ceased, the brass's eyes? nge came alive.
They moved lively,? Ssando cinereus first and then come
the magician who had knocked.
? When it is off the sacred fire? said the s? nge in a
whisper.
? Always burns the sacred fire? murmured reverently, the magician.
And while the eyes of the s? Engels returned to close the door
opened up.
They entered the hall that greeted them was huge, too big
than the external dimensions of the house. Of? Windows visible
there was no sign outside, the walls had no openings.
The low light came from a few candles burning
suspended in midair, in the vicinity of the walls all around the
room. On the ground, beneath each, had accumulated a lot of
wax, but the candles were still intact, did not give the idea of
consumed.
At the center of the room a dark wooden table occupied good
side of the room, the three wizards who were sitting there turned
looking forward to them with air.
? I see that you managed to find our dear friend. You
then found what we were looking? began one of the three
magicians in a strange accent.
? Doubted, perhaps? said the magician heading towards them
cinereus badly and pushing forward.
? It was not easy but I made it?.
He pulled out from under the cloak of a bag I? Linked to
with a cord. Lying them went to the table above. The
touched with the wand and the bag disappeared, showing a
shabby old book.
In the eyes of cinereus lit a flare. From his look
apparent in awe and reverence. He'd never thought of
to see that book before he died. During his
life had stumbled upon a few references to its existence, but
thought had disappeared for centuries.
At Hogwarts there was also a copy. But it was a poor
copies, transcribed centuries later in an incomplete manner. Despite
what Dumbledore had wanted to hide it anyway, taking it
from the section of prohibited books. What we had before was
the original volume, apparently intact. Although the
seen only a set of old parchments bound, was tangible
the enormous power that they emanated. The fear was that
grew within him was rapidly giving way to
reminder of that power.
? I see that you recognize the book cinereus. I hope for you
you'll be able to translate? said the magician in his strange
pronunciation.
Cinereus approached? Ssando the cover. With reverence
turned a few pages, touching only the tip of your fingers.
? Then you're capable? to quickly put another magician.
? Slowly, slowly, you have to understand that this book is old
centuries, and the writing used is perhaps even more ancient, non-
I know. . . ?.
But the other interrupted him, shouting and pointing against the
wand. ? Cinereus yes or no?.
? Sure, sure. . . ? cinereus continued trembling? I did not think
still existed, I knew that a transcript later
was preserved in the Library of Hogwarts, but I never
thought to have in our hands the original?.
He was silent a few seconds, returning to observe the
Cover worn.
? More Dark Secrets of the Art?, Is a very dangerous book.
. . ?.
Again, the other would not let him talk? We know!
You only employed to translate, you are just now able to
do?.
? But what you want it, this book is. . . ?.
? Everything in its time cinereus, all in good time?.

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Ehy, matteo! Ti ringrazio per il lavoro che hai fatto, anche se non posso dirti molto, visto che io non sono bravissima in inglese anzi, faccio pienamente schifo! Very Happy Quindi, lascio commentare ad altri! Very Happy
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io l'inglese non lo so.. come 54 milioni di italiani Wink
posso solo chiederti di ricontrollare il layout della pagina.. perchè la formattazione deve essere saltata e mi sembra abbastanza difficile da leggere così anche per chi l'inglese lo sa!! Wink
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MessaggioTitolo: Re: CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS   CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS EmptyMar Lug 05 2011, 21:17

Con l'aiuto della mia coinquilina che studia Lingue e Traduzione.

Ci sono una serie di errori che si ripetono (come i soggetti che mancano. In Inglese, soprattutto la lingua scritta, i soggetti vanno sempre davanti al verbo)
Ad esempio:
matteo0000 ha scritto:
Was
tired, now almost a month had passed since he had left
for the mission.
"HE was tired" (e il conditional non dovrebbe essere "a month had passed since he left"?)

Allo stesso modo, mancano i pronomi personali che fanno da complemento oggetto e ci sono alcuni errori nella coniugazione dei verbi.
matteo0000 ha scritto:
He had
drinking
"He had drunk it"

In generale è parecchio "italiano tradotto in inglese". Ricordati che nella scrittura anglosassone ci sono delle formule tipiche e delle espressioni che possono e devono essere usate.
Per tradurlo correttamente occorrerebbe un inglese che abbia studiato l'italiano. E' molto più facile lavorare partendo da una lingua straniera per arrivare alla tua lingua madre.

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Ne ho letto solo alcuni pezzi perché è un po' pesante leggere un intero capitolo in inglese... Cmq ci sn un po' di errori nel senso che ci sn espressioni che un inglese nn scriverebbe mai... se vuoi lo mando ad una amica irlandese e te lo faccio correggere xk x quanto possa essere abbastanza bravo in inglese non lo sn a sufficienza da correggere testi letterari.

Poi cm ha già detto Anny Baggins i pronomi nei testi scritti sn fondamentali e bisogna evitare espressioni linguistiche del parlato che gli inglesi non usano nei testi scritti (mi pare ce ne fossero alcune in qualche "discorso diretto libero"...
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Scusa riletto il mio messaggio sembra critico e petulante... Immagino sia stato un lavoraccio e di sicuro nn è fatto male...
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OMG! Non avevo visto che qualcuno aveva già tradotto il 2° capitolo!
Comunque, l'ho tradotto anch'io e per non buttare all'aria un lavoraccio lo metto qui, non si sa mai... tongue
...poi chi di dovere valuterà...

Chapter 2

THE DARKEST BOOK

He arrived too early: the little bookshop wasn't open yet. He could only wait, he couldn't afford to be recognized.
He sat on a bench on the other side of the street. He was tired.
Almost a month had passed since he had left for the mission.
The first part, the most dangerous one, was accomplished. But also that, being there, was a risk.
For this he used the Polyjuice Potion. He drunk it just before dematerialize near the village. He used the hair of a fat and drunk Muggle who had met the night before. He felt embarrassed and disgusted because of that appearance, but it was necessary.
He thought to what happened some days before, when, finally, he found the castle that had been described "like a fortress, as black as the night". According to what he had learned, Grindelwald had spent the last years of his life locked in one of the cells in the highest tower. And right there, he was found mysteriously dead. Only after he discovered that Voldemort killed him during his search for the Elder Wand.
But he was looking for something else in that fortress. He had struggled to overcome all the spells that protect the tower, but, eventually, he did it. He had found what only in his dreams he hoped to find.
He pulled out a battered newspaper. It was "The Daily Prophet" of some days before. The main article shocked him.

AGREEMENT SIGNED WITH THE MAGICAL CREATURES

It's finally established the MaCCoCe (the Magical Creatures Collaboration Centre).
It has been announced yesterday by the Minister of Magic himself. The Minister Kingsley said in preview to our newspaper that "After recents events that brought us together in the fight against the Dark Forces, to confirm the collaboration between Wizards, Witches and all the other Magical Creatures, this new organ has been created." It will be composed by a half of members of the Ministry and a half of representatives of the others Magical Creatures of all over the world. The Domestic Elves and the Centaurs have already adhered and the representatives of other groups will be added soon.
To oversee the signing of this important agreement, the President of the Wizards of America went in official visit. "It's an important step" said the President John Waynegan "We, wizards of the United States, will strive to ensure that this pact will represent an advantage for all of us.

He stopped reading. He was terrified: Wizard reduced to the same level as Domestic Elves.
He, of course, didn't think so. His pure blood was boiling in his veins.
He re-started reading. A short article at the bottom of the page remembered that the preparations for the new year at Hogwarts were underway.

Because of the contribution of the American wizards, the reconstruction works of Hogwarts are finished - turn to page 4 for the interview to the Headmistress, prof. Minerva McGonagall and the rumors on the renewed teaching staff.

He heard a noise coming from the other side of the street. The heavy wooden shutters of the shop that he was checking opened slowly. On the threshold the figure of an old and hunchbacked man appeared. Hoary, with white skin, the man didn't look like a wizard, after lots of years lived among the Muggles.
The old man did a pair of steps, he looked to right, then to the left and finally he re-entered.
- The moment has arrived - he muttered to himself, putting away the newspaper and going towards the bookshop.
Into the store, there were books everywhere. Some of them were neatly arranged on the shelves but many were stacked in an unstable way in every corner of the place.
- Good morning, can I help you? - asked the old man behind the counter.
- Of course, you'll be very helpful. - answered the wizard with a string of ill-concealed malice.
- Cinereus, don't you recognize me? -
The old man seemed to stagger behind the counter.
The Polyjuice Potion changed his face and his build but his voice, deep and hoarse, was unmistakable.
- What the hell are you doing here? You shouldn't see you around! I, I don't want to have anything to do with you! -
- We need you, Cinereus. -
- Don't tell that name: it doesn't belong to me anymore! You haven't resigned yet! Now it's over. We haven't got any hope. We're lucky to be here and not at Azkaban and if anyone knew who you are... -
- Stop, Cinereus! We need your knowledges. Take your stuffs and come with me. Now. -
- Leave me alone! I'm only a poor, old man. I don't care about what I believed in anymore! I want to spend the years that I've left peacefully! - said plaintive.
- Cinereus, we haven't time anymore. Don't make me angry or I... -
The old man didn't leave the time to complete the phrase and with a rapid movement pulled out his wand from under the counter. But the other man was more rapid and screamed: - Expelliarmus! -
Cinereus' wand flew against a stack of books causing its drop.
- We start wrong, Cinereus - said the wizard.
A small old woman, still wrapped in a flamboyant burgundy robe, appeared from a door hidden behind a curtain.
- Who screamed? What the hell... -
When she saw a man pointing a wand against his husband, barely stifled a scream bringing her hand to her mouth.
- Now your husband will come with me, madam. You only have to tell everyone that he's forced to stay in bed because of a bad disease. We are in a few and we must stay hidden, but killing an old witch like your wife isn't a big trouble -
They remained silent for a few moments
- Did you understand, Cinereus? - said the wizard breaking the silence.
- Yes, I did. - surrendered the old man.
The wizard picked un Cinereus' wand and hid it in his coat, then he took the old man's arm and they dematerialized.

They materialized in a forest.
- Come on, we must reach the others - said with hoarse voice starting to walk.
The two men waked hardly in the dense undergrowth. The cold came in the bones. Although it was broad daylight, a dense fog was enfolding everything. Neither the wands were able to illuminate more than a few steps forward.
Other people couldn't survive that environment, they would have been overwhelmed by a sense of oppression, deprived of every spark of vitality.
But Dementors had no effects on them: their souls were evil, there was nothing they could be deprived of.
The cheerfulness that had fallen on the Earth after the epic battle of Hogwarts decimated the Dementors. They had retired in this land where misery and poverty were taking away any hope for the future.
With their arrive, everything became worse. No wizard would set foot in that area. But it was different for them. that had become the most secure place to hide.
- Here we are - said the wizard. In front of them, there was a rock where there were two crossed sings engraved. He reached out his wand over the rock and whispered some formulas.
- Now we can pass, quickly. The spells of protection will be reactivated immediately. -
- No one will fine us in this forgot place... Who should do this? - complained Cinereus, panting.
- Shut up! Do you think that we didn't considered everything that can happen? - answered the wizard, ireful.
Just in that moment the effect of the Polyjuice Potion finished. That fat body contracted until it returned the skinny figure of the wizard with who the old man had divided lots of ideals.
Suddenly the figure of the ruin appeared. It was almost invisible among the dense vegetation.
The years of abandonment and the environment took the windward. The vines, solid like broomsticks, seemed to crush the house. Lots of branches had broken the windows and had gone through the roof.
They went up three steps and they stopped on the threshold. An ancient brass door knocker depicting a sphinx was fixed on a door in front of them. The wizard knocked three times and, when the echo of the knocker ceased, the eyes of the sphinx came alive. They moved looking Cinereus and the wizard that knocked.
- When did the sacred fire extinguish? - asked the sphinx in a whisper.
- The sacred fire always burns - answered the wizard, reverently.
The door opened. They entered. The lounge that received them was enormous, too big for the external dimension of the house. There were no windows, contrary to what seemed from the outside. The low light came from the candles distributed along the walls of the room.
In the centre, a big and dark wooden table occupied most of the area. The three wizards sitting there, turned towards the new arrivals with impatient air.
- I see that you've found our dear friend. Did you find what we were looking for? - began one of them with a strange accent.
- You doubted it, perhaps? - said the wizard pulling Cinereus ahead badly - It wasn't simple but I did it. -
He pulled out from his cloak a bundle of cloth tied with a cord. He approached the table and put the bundle on it. he touched it with his wand and the envelope disappeared, showing an old book.
In Cinereus' eyes lit a glow. He would never have thought he could see that book before his death. It was thought that book was disappeared for centuries.
A copy of that book was at Hogwarts, but it was incomplete. Nevertheless, Dumbledore decided to hide it just the same, taking it off by the Section of Prohibited Books.
What Cinereus had in his hands was the original one, apparently intact. The enormous power of that book was palpable. The fear that was in him was slowly giving away to the call of that power.
- I see that you recognized the book, Cinereus. I hope you'll be able to translate it. - said the wizard with the strange accent.
Cinereus approached looking at the cover. With reverence, he turned some pages, touching them only with the tip of the fingers.
- So, can you do it? .
- You have to understand that this book is old and the writing could be older, I don't know if... -
The other man interrupted him pointing his wand against him and screaming: - Cinereus, yes or no? -
- Of course, of course... - continued Cinereus - I've never thought that it still exist. I knew that a copy was conserved in Hogwarts' library, but I never thought to have the original one in my hands... -
He remained silent for a few seconds observing the worn cover.
- Secrets of the Most Obscure Art... It's a very dangerous book... -
Again, the other man stopped him: - We know that! You only have to translate it! Few people remained can do this... -
- But, what do you want to do? this book is... -
- Everything at its time, Cinereus, everything at its time... -.
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MessaggioTitolo: Re: CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS   CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS EmptyMar Lug 19 2011, 14:44

Diciamo che così si capisce meglio di quello che era stato postato prima...

Vabbè, faccio commentare a chi di inglese ne capisce più di me... Razz
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Enrico ha scritto:
Diciamo che così si capisce meglio di quello che era stato postato prima...

Vabbè, faccio commentare a chi di inglese ne capisce più di me... Razz

peccato che non si possa mettere "mi piace" ai commenti! Wink
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allora, secondo me "The first part, the most dangerous one, was accomplished. But also that, being there..." potrebbe suonare meglio "...was accomplished, even though being there... "avendoci dato solo un'occhiata non ho trovato altre imperfezioni, ma a parte tutto, gran bel lavoro!
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Eliolux ha scritto:
allora, secondo me "The first part, the most dangerous one, was accomplished. But also that, being there..." potrebbe suonare meglio "...was accomplished, even though being there... "avendoci dato solo un'occhiata non ho trovato altre imperfezioni, ma a parte tutto, gran bel lavoro!

Giusto! non ci avevo pensato!
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MessaggioTitolo: Re: CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS   CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS EmptyMar Lug 26 2011, 12:02

La prima traduzione contiene moltissimi errori, mentre la seconda è già più inglese. Ora che sono capitata qui vi do una mano, visto che sto studiando per diventare traduttrice e interprete. Datemin un po' di tempo e vi revisiono la seconda traduzione va bene? Sapete dirmi dov'è il primo apitolo tradotto?
Grazieeeeeeeeee!!
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MessaggioTitolo: Re: CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS   CHAPTER 2 THE BEST OF THE DARK BOOKS EmptyMar Lug 26 2011, 12:16

Il primo capitolo lo trovi qui: https://docs.google.com/viewer?a=v&pid=explorer&chrome=true&srcid=0B-7CLM-Ch5UHMTY2NWZhOTAtMGVhMy00N2I0LWIxZDktMjJkOTU3N2VlZjVk&hl=it

Questo è stato tradotto da una ragazza madrelingua, quindi dovrebbe essere ok!
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